CK Lynn

You might consider tossing the poll. They're kind of annoying in the literture sections. The piece itself I enjoyed, emotional without crossing the line to emo or teen-angst poetry. The ...

I liked this! Though maybe space it out? So everyday it's all the same The morning set in a background of Grey Nighttime just an illusion to shield our thoughts ...

I agree with idle muse. All the global warning stuff was incredibly preachy and "Save Our Planet!" hype at its worst. While the UberDirector stuff was good, James Patterson could ...

I kind of (this is said tentatively) like it. The title however, put me off since it is very, very cheesey. Change it immediatly. Meanwhile, in the actual poem, there ...

Yeah, I'd have to agree with the others. I can't really see what point you're trying to get across, and your subject is a little hazy. High school students? Got ...

Okay, first, if its a haiku, SAY THAT! at the beginning so you don't end up with a bunch of people thinking that you just don't know how to write. ...

I really liked it. Sounds like a cool story. I would like alittle more background, though. The one thing that I didn't like was when Coal said "Then why do ...

I really liked the overall theme and language of this piece. Very nice! However, the fourth line just didn't work. It broke the rythmn you had up until then. Also, ...

I really thought this was good song. THe title gave me a much different empression of what it was, though. In the third line of the third verse, do you ...

I liked it, it was quite different and didn't come right out and say "I am a cat" in the first line. There was one problem, and that was the ...

[quote]Creating words, an act to tame you Disguising my true intentions Making you understand my false words Only to be really messed up in nature I liked the subject, in ...

I liked it a lot, but it was kind of missing something. I'm not quite sure what, but I think this poem missed making sense/connecting/being meaningful by the skin of ...

The constant -th -th -th was very annoying and detrcted from the poem. Forcing something to sound like old English doesn't make it good, just phoney and stiffled sounding. Let ...

Your song was nice, but sooooooo depressing :cry: . How about some happy tunes? Also, your song didn't have alot of body and seemed to "slip" a lot.